this is the draft of a work portfolio page--for the project that i believe we just got fired from.
comments/criticisms appreciated, or feel free to email them to me if you don't want to post. i thought it might be interesting to look at an example page since jason and i are re-upping.
i did not draw the plan, nor the hand drawing in the lower left--though i was in charge of the elevations/sections--this was drawn by the p.a.--and it seemed cooler than putting in a cad section from the cds. all the rest i created.
these are two other thumbs of school project pages for context--
i'm not sure the other main project i worked on has enough to put it together, and in some ways may be a better example for comparison, i'll take another look at it, and see if it's worth posting.
2 comments:
Are you looking for comments on content or layout? For layout... I feel like the items are sprinkled and my eye doesn't know where to start looking and what path to follow for the next items. Maybe these don't need to be viewed in a particular order, but I think viewers need a suggested start and end point, anyway. This puts them at ease and viewers like clarity.
The left-hand side of your third board (the yellowy building) is really good because it uses one item as a dynamic focal point and then the three supporting images are shown uniformly and in a straight path. You have the large image to draw in the viewer and the other three to round out what you're communicating.
Could be worth trying with the first board... choose one as the obvious focal point and put the others in some sort of controlled order.
There are other people talking about the issues involved in representing professional work.
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